Question

6．假如你叫李华，暑假即将来临．你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇记述讨论内容的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法，文章开头已给出．
优点缺点
呆在家中舒适，能好好休息，和亲人、同学相聚失去开阔眼界的机会
外出旅游有机会和不同的人交流，丰富自己的经历花费多，旅途不便
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．参考词汇：开阔眼界 broaden horizon
The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．After a tiring term，they believe it isa convenient and comfortable way to relax．Besides，it's traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives．But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for travelling．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge andbroadentheir horizons．However，it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well．
In my view．It will be better to stay at home．For I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework．We can do anything that we want to do，such as reading book watchingTVand helping parents do housework．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇讨论了假期计划的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时态．内容包括：一点明文章的主题；二呆在家中和外出旅游两种计划的优缺点；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．After a tiring term，they believe it is a convenient and comfortable way to relax．句子里 it做宾语从句的主语，代指旅行； to relax是动词不定式做 a convenient and comfortable way 的定语； convenient 表示"便利的"．
在劳累的一个学期之后，他们相信这是一个能够放松的便利又舒适的方法．
2．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons句子里动名词短语meeting different people 做宾语从句的主语，表示"遇见不同的人"； broaden their horizons表示"拓宽他们的眼界"．
他们认为遇见不同的人会增加他们的知识，拓宽他们的眼界．

解答 The summer holiday is coming． Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．（点明文章的主题）
    Some are in favor of staying at home．After a tiring term，they believe it is a convenient and comfortable way to relax．【高分句型一】Besides，it's traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives．But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for travelling．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型二】However，it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well．（呆在家中和外出旅游两种计划的优缺点）
   In my view．It will be better to stay at home．For I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework．We can do anything that we want to do，such as reading book watching TV and helping parents do housework．（自己的看法）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．