Question

近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注，请用英语写一篇关于校园安全的文章，字数在100-120之间，文章应包括以下内容：

1．阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题

2．对此我们应该采取哪些措施

3．对校园安全的展望

注意：文章的第一句已给出（不计词数）。

Campus Security

Security issue has always been one of our main concerns, and when it comes to the campus security,

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One possible version :

Campus Security

     Security issue has always been one of our main concerns, and when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it more seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen. A surrounding with stealing can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

     On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we find something unusual in our campus., we should report it to the campus guard immediately .On the other hand , more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible .Besides , a proper number of security guards should be arranged to walk around the

       In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as we work together and schools will try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求就校园安全问题写一篇文章，校园是学生生活学习的地方，所以就此话题学生应该写起来得心应手，但是在审题时要注意以下几个方面：首先，阐述目前校园存在的问题时要用一般现在时态，对校园展望部分应该采用将来时态；其次，文章是三个要点，所以最好采用经典的三段式来说明现状，措施及对未来的展望；最后，行文时要注意词法，句法和连接词的恰当使用，以便使文章前后连贯，给人以耳目一新的感觉。

【亮点说明】文章采用经典的三段式来表述现状，应采取的措施以及对未来的展望。这样的模式使范文脉络清晰，要点突出。此外文中并列句，复合句和一些固定句式的使用不仅使文章避免了句式的单调也给文章锦上添花，使得范文亮点纷呈，比如定语从句there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen条件状语从句和并列句 campus security will be improved as long as we work together and schools will try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.以及.固定句型when it comes to等。再者文中on the one hand ，on the other hand等短语也使文章表述更加清楚明了，结构更为紧凑。总之这是一篇值得借鉴的优秀范文。

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