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18．假设你是李华，暑假将至，你的外国朋友Alice发来邮件请你推荐旅游目的地，请给她回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1．景点位置、地位
2．当地特色（自然人文、美食、交通等）
3．相关提示
注意：1．文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
2．可适当增加细节，使文章内容充实、连贯．
3．词数100词左右．
Dear Alice，
Hearing that you will spend the summer vacation touring in China，I'm more than glad to offer my recommendation．
As for my favorite touring place，I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan，which is located in the southwest of China．（高分句型一）
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery，rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food．（高分句型二）Also，it is home to ancient poets，artists，and political leaders known to the world．Chengdu，its capital，is a slow-paced and modern city in possession of large hotels and shopping centers．With convenient traffic network，you can travel to anywhere throughout the province．
By the way，weather can be hot and changeable in summer，so it is sensible to check it before setting out．（高分句型三）I believe you will have an unforgettable trip．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，暑假将至，你的外国朋友Alice发来邮件请你推荐旅游目的地，请给她回复一封邮件．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：景点位置、地位；当地特色（自然人文、美食、交通等）；相关提示 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：more than 非常；As for 至于，关于；is located in 坐落于；as well as也，和；By the way顺便说一下；
As for my favorite touring place，I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan，which is located in the southwest of China．（高分句型一）
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery，rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food．（高分句型二）
By the way，weather can be hot and changeable in summer，so it is sensible to check it before setting out．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Alice，
       Hearing that you will spend the summer vacation touring in China，I'm more than glad to offer my recommendation．
       As for my favorite touring place，I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan，which is located in the southwest of China．（高分句型一）
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery，rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food．（高分句型二）Also，it is home to ancient poets，artists，and political leaders known to the world．Chengdu，its capital，is a slow-paced and modern city in possession of large hotels and shopping centers．With convenient traffic network，you can travel to anywhere throughout the province．
       By the way，weather can be hot and changeable in summer，so it is sensible to check it before setting out．（高分句型三）I believe you will have an unforgettable trip．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．