Question

假设你是Li Hua，昨天是你18岁的生日，请根据下列要点，用英语写一篇日记。
要点：
1. 简要描述庆祝生日的时间、地点、方式和参加对象；
2．描述让你最感动的一个场景；
3．最后写出你的感受。
注意：
1.内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数100左右；
2．不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用具体的人名和地名；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
March 11,2010  Fine
Yesterday was my 18^th birthday.___________________________
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Answer 1

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March 11,2010 Fine
Yesterday was my 18th birthday. As Father and Mother thought it was a big occasion for me，they suggested I hold a birthday party at home to celebrate it. For several days they had been busy preparing for this. By 4 o’clock I was pleased to see all my friends had come. Mother cooked us a big meal.
We ate and talked happily. The most exciting moment was when Mother put a big birthday cake on the table and all my friends began to sing HappyBirthday. Seeing the 18 candles burning，I couldn’t keep back my tears. Mother asked me to make a wish before I blew out all the candles. After that，everyone enjoyed the sweet birthday cake and shared my happiness.
I am eighteen years old now，which means I’ve become an adult and have more responsibilities .I’ll do my best to return my parents’ love and live up to their expectations.

解析试题分析：英文日记属于应用文的一种，日记是记叙当天自己亲身经历的一些重要的、有意义的事情。因此，在写作时应注意日记必须用第一人称"I"进行叙述。另外，由于日记中所记叙的事情已经发生，所以整篇日记的时态常用过去时态。当然，在直接引语中或在表示客观真理或事实时仍然要用一般现在时。写作前都要注意仔细审题，抓住要点，理清叙述的顺序。写作时正文的开头一般不用写表示日期的句子，因为日记中已有日期，再写就重复了。应注意英文日记的格式。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了，有连贯性。日记应以时间发生的先后顺序来展开，并且要简明扼要，条理清楚，写出真实感。日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。记事型是用英语记述当天自己生活学习中发生的事情。议论型是对生活中的某一事情或情况现象谈自己的看法，发表议论。描写型或抒情型，则是对某人物或事物的特征做细致的描述，或针对某事物抒发自己的感情。