Question

【题目】假设你是高一新生Tom,请你给自己的初中同学Jack发一封邮件，简要介绍自己的高中生活。

要点：1）已经适应了高中的生活，并且交了好多朋友。

2）非常想念过去的老师和同学们；与现在的同学相处很好，对老师很满意。

3）自己一定努力学习，为的是三年以后能够上一所好大学。

注意：1）词数100左右；

2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

How time flies!

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

How time flies! We haven’t seen each other for a long time. Now I’d like to tell you something about my high school life.

I have been in the new school for more than two months. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in junior middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】试题分析：本题是写一篇给定材料的电子邮件，写作的话题为介绍你的高一生活，具体内容包括刚进入高中时的心情和感受，现在结交了一些朋友，对过去老师和学生们的想念，以及现在与同学和老师的关系，通常写上高中学习的打算和个人的梦想，在写作时应注意符合题意，注意邮件的格式和不同时态的使用，以及语言的准确性和连贯性，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，语言朴实，句子衔接紧密，文章结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。象范文中的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引导的原因状语从句和it做形式主语的句型，还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等词，这样文章显得更连贯。