Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣，本周五学校将要举办“校园文化周”，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请Tom去体验编织艺术，内容包括：

1. 提出邀请并简述原因

2. 活动的内容（了解编织艺术的历史：1000多年：观看编织艺术的展览：用竹子编椅子、窗帘、装饰品）

3. 约定与Tom见面的时间和地点

4. 期待对方的回复

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

提示词汇：校园文化周the Campus Culture Week

中国民间艺术Chinese folk art

Dear Tom,

I am Li Hua. _____________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom

Here comes a piece of good news. The Campus Culture Week will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, it’s a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us to feel the fascination of the weaving art.

The activity is scheduled to last approximately two hours, from 3:30pm to 5:30pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content. Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs to decorations, but also we’ll watch the documentary concerning the history of the weaving art. In addition, some distinguished professors will be invited to deliver a lecture about how to promote the development of the weaving art, during which time you will be definitely gain a better understanding of it. By the way, if you are available, we’ll meet at three sharp outside the school gate.

How I hope you can take my invitation into consideration! Your timely reply will be highly appreciated.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇书信类作文。要求你以李华的身份邀请你校的交换生Tom参加本周五学校将要举办的“校园文化周” 去体验编织艺术。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，不能出现跑题偏题。文章给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，内容包括：1. 提出邀请并简述原因2. 活动的内容（了解编织艺术的历史：1000多年：观看编织艺术的展览：用竹子编椅子、窗帘、装饰品）3. 约定与Tom见面的时间和地点4. 期待对方的回复。使用的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，也要加入高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，如：have a strong passion for，fascination，is scheduled to， approximately，a variety of、take …into consideration和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词In addition，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：120左右。

【范文亮点】①Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs to decorations, but also we’ll watch the documentary concerning the history of the weaving art..倒装句。②some distinguished professors will be invited to deliver a lecture about how to promote the development of the weaving art, during which time you will be definitely gain a better understanding of it.定语从句。