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　　1932年居里夫人应邀回到家乡参加会议。当她走进会议大厅时，两个女孩为她献花。当她发现坐在轮椅里的启蒙老师时，她走上前，把鲜花献给了老师，并把轮椅推到前排，把老师介绍给在场的要。居里夫人不忘老师的行为更加受到人们的尊重。

请以A Respected Scientist为题，用英语写一篇记叙文。词数：120～150。

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A Respected Scientist 　　In 1932，the great scientist Madam Curie was invited for① a public meeting in her hometown．When she entered the meeting hall，two girls came to her and presented fresh flowers．The crowd cheered and welcome②her．Suddenly she saw an old white-haired woman in a wheel-chair．She went up to the old woman and put her arm③around her neck and gave the flowers to her． Then Madam Curie pushed the wheel-chair to the front row of④hall and introduced her to the people．She said，“ I'll always remember this old woman as one of my first teachers． She led me through darkness to learn about the world．”⑤Those words won the praise of all the people there．Madam Curie was a great scientist，⑥she respected her first teacher．Therefore，Madam Curie herself is remembered by people all over the world． 　　修改：①for→to　与invite连用的介词常用to。 　　②welcome→welcomed　cheered和welcomed是两个并列的谓语动词，故用动词的一般过去式。 　　③arm→arms　根据上下文，此处最好用名词的复数形式。 　　④of→of the　hall前应加定冠词，表特指。 　　⑤此句写得精彩！不但用词准确，而且淋漓尽致地表达了对老师的赞颂。 　　⑤she→but she　加上连词but后，可使上下旬语意连接得更紧凑。 　　评点：本篇习作语言通顺，生动地描写了一位伟大的科学家尊重教师的感人场景，很有教育意义。文中使用presented fresh flowers，introduced her to the people和被动语态等较高级的词汇和语法结构，是一篇好作文。