Question

请根据上面两幅图写一篇短文，写作时要注意以下几点：

??? 1. 第一段把漫画中的内容描述清楚；

??? 2. 第二段写你自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点；适当地发挥，使语言连贯。

??? 词数：100左右

??? 参考词汇：扶起瓶子straighten the bottle up

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Do you understand this cartoon? Let me tell you. One day, the son wanted to help a little girl stand up when she fell over, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked at seeing her son just let the fallen oil bottle lie. She asked him why he didn’t put it in place, but the boy talked back, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”

I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well. They should let their children know it’s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in a society which is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇漫画类作文。首先要看懂漫画所要表达的意思。其次注意1. 第一段把漫画中的内容描述清楚； 2. 第二段写你自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点；适当地发挥，使语言连贯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.这里含有一个强调句；She asked him why he didn’t put it in place,这里含有一个宾语从句；If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it这里含有一个宾语从句。

考点：漫画类书面表达