Question

某英语报举办以勤俭节约为主题的中学生英语写作大赛：要求参赛者根据以下四幅图内容，用英语描述发生在李华身上真实的故事并阐述其意义。

注意：1、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2、词数120左右。

参考词汇：节俭thrift

One day， Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout,

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One dya ,Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought. After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bag by using a pair of his old trousers. Several hours later, he did make himself a very nice bag. When he showed it to his mother, she was amazed at what he had done and praised him a lot .

Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environmental friendly behavior. What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us. Therefore , I believe that thrift is a good virtue for every one of us Chinese to keep.

【解析】

试题分析: 图表作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语was amazed at对，，感到吃惊；make use of 利用；What’s more,而且；After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bag by using a pair of his old trousers.这个句子中运用it occur to sb that 某人突然间想起。。；Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environmental friendly behavior.这个句子think后面带有一个宾语从句，从句中动名词做主语；What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us.这个句子中it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式，which引导非限制性定语从句；

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