题目内容
15.今年从3月1日起,上海全面实施全国最严室内禁烟令.按照新规,上海的室内公共场所、室内工作场所、公共交通工具内都将全面禁止吸烟.但是,从实施之日起至今,仍然有很多人违反规定,请你就此事在微博上发表评论,内容包括:(1)简单介绍室内禁烟令;
(2)列举违反规定的现象;
(3)谈谈你对此种现象的看法.
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数.
提示词:禁烟令smoking ban
According to the strictest smoking ban since March 1st this year,According to the strictest smoking ban since March 1st this year,people in Shanghai are forbidden to smoke in every indoor public place including working offices,any means of transportation,etc.
However,there have been many people violating the ban so far.For example,one day on my way to school in a bus,I saw a middle-aged man smoking,neglecting the warning of the driver completely.
As far as I'm concerned,it is necessary to ban smoking in public places,for smoking can ruin the health of both the smoker and the people around him.Therefore,I want to appeal to the smokers to learn and obey the new rules so that we could have a better public environment.
分析 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
亮点句型一:For example,one day on my way to school in a bus,I saw a middle-aged man smoking,neglecting the warning of the driver completely. 例如,有一天,在我上学的路上,我看到一个中年男子抽烟,完全无视司机的警告.本句用了see sb doing结构,smoking在句中做the man的宾语补足语,动词neglect与主语I之间是主谓关系,neglecting是现在分词在句中做伴随状语.
亮点句型二:Therefore,I want to appeal to the smokers to learn and obey the new rules so that we could have a better public environment.因此,我想呼吁吸烟者学习和遵守新规则,以便我们能有一个更好的公共环境.appeal sb to do sth是"呼吁某人做某事",so that 引导的是目的状语从句.
解答 According to the strictest smoking ban since March 1st this year,people in Shanghai are forbidden to smoke in every indoor public place including working offices,any means of transportation,etc.【介绍禁令】
However,there have been many people violating the ban so far.For example,one day on my way to school in a bus,I saw a middle-aged man smoking,neglecting the warning of the driver completely.(亮点句型一)【存在现象】
As far as I'm concerned,it is necessary to ban smoking in public places,for smoking can ruin the health of both the smoker and the people around him.Therefore,I want to appeal to the smokers to learn and obey the new rules so that we could have a better public environment.(亮点句型二)【个人观点】
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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