Question

【题目】短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I bring Rose home five years ago. My neighbor Mrs. Black fell in love with her immediate she saw her. She was such lovely dog, after all. Rose also seemed to like Mrs. Black. Two years ago, however, Mrs. Black got cancer. Having been treating in hospital, she decided to receive treatment at home. Since my husband and I were busy in our work, we seldom went to see her. Three months ago, Mrs. Black died. To our surprised, her husband came to thank to us for keeping Rose one day. He said in the past several months, Rose went to accompany his wife every day before my husband and I went to work. With she around, his wife felt so warm and wasn't in so much pain. I never knew that. That Rose did was really heartwarming.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】bring brought

【2】immediate immediately

【3】such 后面加 a

【4】treating treated

【5】busy 后面in with

【6】surprised surprise

【7】thank 后面 to去掉

【8】before after

【9】sheher

【10】That What

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，讲述我家的小狗Rose在我们不知情的情况下去陪患病的邻居的故事。

【1】bring brought 考查时态。本句的时间状语是five years ago，这是一个表示过去的时间 ，所以本句使用一般过去时。

【2】immediate immediately 考查连词。本句中分词immediately转换成连词，引导时间状语从句，意为“一...就...”，我的邻居布莱克夫人一看见她就喜欢上她了。

【3】such 后面加 a 考查冠词。名词dog是一个可数名词，所以使用不定冠词a修饰该名词。句意：毕竟，她是一只如此可爱的狗。

【4】treating treated 考查语态。我的邻居布莱克夫人患了癌症，在医院里接受治疗，动词treat与Mrs. Black之间构成被动关系，所以使用过去分词。

【5】busy 后面in with 考查固定搭配。形容词短语be busy with sth忙于某事。因为我丈夫和我忙于工作，我们很少去看她。

【6】surprised surprise 考查固定搭配。短语to our surprise让我们惊讶的是，其中介词to的后面要接名词surprise。：让我们惊讶的是，她的丈夫来感谢我们。

【7】thank 后面 to去掉 考查动词。动词thank意为“感谢”，这是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要介词。

【8】before after 考查连词。如果Rose在我们离开之前就去陪邻居，那么我们应该知道这件事情。直到布莱克先生来感谢我们，我们才知道这件事情。说明Rose是在我们上班以后去陪布莱克夫人的。所以使用连词after，表示“在...之后”。

【9】sheher 考查代词。根据文章第二句My neighbor Mrs. Black fell in love with her immediate she saw her.可知Rose是一只雌性，所以本句在her指代rose，作为介词with的宾语。

【10】That What 考查主语从句。本句中what引导主语从句并在句中作主语。连接词that可以引导状语从句，但是不能在句中作成分。