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It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in that moment when I felt I was a grown-up
It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our (us) us 与teenagers 是同位语 teenagers, so (去掉 so ) 此处为主句my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend (attending) 此处作状语,用在with后,用doing my birthday party, I really had (加an ) experience此处指的是经历,可数名词 unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing (danced) 作并列谓语,and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent (parents) 父母是两个人,要选用复数told me that from then on I was no longer a child and (but)not..but 结构,意为我不再是一个孩子了,而是一个大人了 an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly (responsible)此处与independent是并列关系,作表语. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in (at)常用搭配 that moment when (that)强调句 I felt I was a grown-up. ]
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