Question

短文改错. 本题共有10处错误，请在原文中改正（满分10分）

My bicycle went wrong again. Tired with repairing it again and again, I decide to buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked such cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeeper told us that it is the latest bicycle. He wanted to charge me 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford for such an expensive one. Then I chose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, it was much better than the old one.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 with →of  

 decide →decided 

  locating →located 

 The →A

 such →so  

  Is→Was

  that →which 

 去掉for

 him →me  

  it前加but

【解析】

试题分析：

 with →of  固定搭配be tired of厌倦…；相当于be bored with…。

 decide →decided  本文的基本时态是一般过去时，故本句中的动词使用过去式。

 locating →located 本句中的located是形容词，对前面的名词进行修饰限制。形成固定搭配be located in…位于…；

  The →A 本句泛指一辆黑色的自行车，这里是第一次出现，故使用a表示。

  such →so  副词so后面接形容词或者副词，形成so…that…如此…以至于…；such后面要接名词或者代词。

  Is→Was 本文的基本时态是一般过去时，使用使用was。

  that →which  that不能引导非限制性定语从句，which可以引导非限制性定语从句，指代先行词做主语等。

 去掉for 动词afford是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语。介词for是多余的。

  him →me  本句指这一个花掉了我200元。因为是我购买的。

  it前加but 上下文之间的转折关系，它不完美，但是比我旧的那个好多了。

考点：考查学生在上下文语境中对词汇语法的掌握情况

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。