题目内容
面对繁重的高中学习任务，高中生对参加学校活动有着不同的看法，请以Taking Part in School Activities为题，用英文写一篇150词左右的短文，着重介绍两种不同的观点和态度，最后谈你个人看法。不得署名。
△很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识，又可以得到放松；
△不少学生不关心，认为学生就应该学习，学校活动与学习无关。嘲讽积极参加学校活动的学生。
标题和开头已给，不计入总词数。少于或多于150词20个以上扣2分。
Taking Part in School Activities
As for school activities, students mainly hold two views.
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Taking part in school activities
As for school activities, students mainly hold two views.
Many students are very enthusiastic about school activities; they have their reasons. Firstly, they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task and they should take any chance to get some practical knowledge. Secondly, they hold that after long hours’ study, they can relax themselves by participating in school activities.
However, a large group of students take little interest in them and spend most of their time on study. They believe that they should make full use of time to study and that school activities have little to do with their further development. Thus sometimes they even laugh at those who take an active part in school activities.
As far as I am concerned, I prefer the first view. On the one hand, we can learn a great deal from other students we meet in activities. Furthermore, the modern society requires many qualities of young students, so “book worms” can’t keep up with thee times.
解析:
文章行文力争自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，要使用一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，可以使用时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。
