题目内容
8.假定你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发了电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复.请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:1.未及时回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职,旅行,做志愿者等)
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 高分句型一:
Not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will offer me a chance to improve my communicative skills.我不仅可以自己挣钱,而且它给了我一个提高我交流技巧的机会.
高分句型二:
If possible,I would like to do some voluntary work like helping the children in the orphanage to enrich my life.如果可能,我想做一些类似于帮助孤儿的志愿者工作来丰富自己的人生阅历.
句型一 Not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will offer me..该句中使用了固定短语not only…but also..not only 位于句首后面连接句子时,句子要使用部分倒装--即主语同谓语部分的助动词进行位置的交换:can I earn money by myself…but also后面的句子使用正常语序
句型二 If possible…该句是一个省略句,当状语从句的主语为it 且从句中包含有be动词时,可省略从句主语和be动词,完整的句子是:if it was possible…
解答 Dear Tom,
How is everything going?I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.I've been preparing for the final exams these days,so I forgot to write back.In your letter,you asked me for my plans on summer vacation.Now,I am writing to tell you some specific details.(写信目的)
To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman.Not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will offer me a chance to improve my communicative skills.(高分句型一)In addition,it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots during the vacation so I can enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends.If possible,I would like to do some voluntary work like helping the children in the orphanage to enrich my life.(假期打算)(高分句型二)
I sincerely apologize again.By the way,what's your plan to spend your summer vacation?I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 该书面表达为提纲类,该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路,罗列出了相应的写作要点.考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语,在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合,用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来.