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3．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况．请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
1．简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 
2．位置：天安门广场南面； 
3．交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 
4．特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等． 
参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 
当 当车 trolley car 
地铁 subway 
注意：
1．词数100左右； 
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 
3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上．
Dear Sarah，
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street．Here is something about it．
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Thank you!
                                                                Yours sincerely，
                                                                Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是对改建后前门大街的情况介绍的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明书信目的；二介绍改建后前门大街的情况，包括简况；位置，交通和特色．
高分句型：
1．As the street is in the center of Beijing，just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．句子里As引导原因状语从句；it's very convenient to 表示"做某事是便利的"．
因为这条街在北京市中心，就在天安门广场南面，所以做公共汽车很方便．
2 Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．句子里not only…but also 表示"不但…而且"；where 引导定语从句，代指先行词 theatres and teahouses．
前门大街是步行街，但是当当车不仅能够带你去商店，也可以去茶馆和剧院，在这里，你可以体验到真正的中国人的生活方式．

解答 Dear Sarah，
     Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Oianmen Street．Here is something about it．（点明书信目的）
     Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old．Along this 800-meter street，there are more than 300 shops．As the street is in the center of Beijing，just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．【高分句型一】You may take Buses No.17，69 or 59．Subway Line 2 has a stop there too．Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．【高分句型二】（介绍改建后前门大街的情况，包括简况；位置，交通和特色）
     I'm sure you'll like it．
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．