Question

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请根据以上三幅女儿为父母手绘的出行攻略，用英语写一篇作文．
〖写作内容〗
1．用约30词概述手绘攻略的特点
2，概述你看了此攻略后的感受（至少两点）；
3．•举例说明你能为父母或长辈做些什么（至少两卢）
〖写作要求〗
1．词数150左右．开头部分己写好，不计入词数．
2•作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．
TO make it easier for her parents to get to America，a young woman has drawn three pictures．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态用一般现在时．人称用第一人称和第三人称．重要短语：on one's way to（在去往的路上），be considerate（体贴的，考虑周到的），taken pains to do sth（不辞辛劳地做某事），come up with （想出），be of great help（有帮助的），as for（关于），be faced with （面临，面对），try one's best（努力做某事），bring sb up（抚养某人），care for（关心），be supposed to do （应该做某事），have a talk with sb（和某人交流；谈话）．
【高分句型一】
1．To make it easier for her parents to get to America，a young girl has drawn three pictures．
此处是由"不定式"表目的，主句为"a young girl has drawn three pictures"．
【高分句型二】
2．These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way to America．
此处是由省略了关系代词"that/which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"information"定语从句为"the old couple may need on their way to America"，从句中动词"need"后缺少宾语．
【高分句型三】
3．Seeing the pictures，I'm deeply moved like many others．
此处是由现在分词"Seeing the pictures"作时间状语，主句为"I'm deeply moved like many others"，主句的主语为"I"与所给动词"see"构成逻辑上的主动关系．
【高分句型四】
4．Also，she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea，which will be of great help to her parents．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea"，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语．

解答 To make it easier for her parents to get to America，a young girl has drawn three pictures．【高分句型一】These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way to America．【高分句型二】With vivid drawings and clear instructions，they are impressive and easy to understand．（概括）
 Seeing the pictures，I'm deeply moved like many others．【高分句型三】The young woman is very sweet and considerate．She loves her parents so much．Also，she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea，which will be of great help to her parents．【高分句型四】（感受）
As for me，my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life．I should try my best to help them．First，we should respect our parents since they bring us up and care for us all the time．Second，we are supposed to do some housework at home．For example，we should help clean the room，cook meals and so on．Third，we should care for them and have a talk with them about their work，trying to understand them．（能为父母或长辈做的事）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．