Question

去年暑假你们游览了北京，下面是你们的行程，请就此写一篇100词左右的短文。

早上：和几个朋友一起乘地铁前往天安门广场（Tiananmen Square）,观看了升旗（flag-raising ceremony），照了许多照片；

中午：在前门大街（Qianmen Street）吃了北京特色小吃（Beijing specialty food）;

下午：参观了自己梦寐以求的北京大学，并和大学生们简单交流了一下；

晚上：乘公共汽车回宾馆，途径鸟巢（Bird’s Nest），夜晚的鸟巢美不胜收。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last summer holiday, my friends and I visited the capital of China, Beijing. Early in the morning, we took the subway to head for Tiananmen Square, where we watched the flag-raising ceremony. We also took many photos on Tiananmen Square. After that, we went to Qianmen Street where we had Beijing specialty food for lunch at noon. In the afternoon, we toured around Beijing University, which I had been dreaming of . When walking on the campus, I took the opportunity to talk with some college students, from whom I learned a lot. In the evening, we took a bus to return to the hotel. On the way we passed the spectacular Bird’s Nest, whose beauty was beyond description at night.

What a memorable tour!

【解析】本文介绍了和朋友们游览北京的行程。注意使用过去时，同时也要注意使用时间顺序来连接全文，这样可以让文章更有条理，不凌乱。在写作的过程中要使用高级的词汇，如opportunity， ceremony等让文章更有文采。