Question

假如你叫李华，是一位高中学生。请你用英语给某报社写一封信，反映如下情况和你的想法：
　　1. 教室是学生学习的地方，需要安静。
　　2. 有些学生把手机带进教室，在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声。
　　3. 有的同学还在课堂上发短信息，浪费宝贵的学习时间。
　　4. 建议有手机的同学上课时应把手机关掉，不要接听电话或发短信息，集中注意力学习。
注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 词数: 100左右；
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high student
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high student. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge. Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons. But recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phone.
To keep the classroom quiet, those with mobile phones should not talk on the phone or send short messages. They should turn them off. We are supposed to concentrate on our studies.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要点时以时间为顺序，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。
考点：考查提纲类短文写作。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，本文以时间为序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。