题目内容

请你根据以下提示,以My experience as a volunteer为题写一篇短文给校办刊物投稿,与读者分享自己寒假做志愿者的经历:
时间: 寒假期间的每个周末;
主要活动:给老人打扫房间;给老人读文章;带领老人锻炼身体;
体会:给老人带来快乐;这次经历使自己更有爱心。
注意:
可根据内容需要适当拓展,以使行文连贯;
词数100左右。
My experience as a volunteer

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My experience as a volunteer
During the winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer at a nursing home every weekend. As a volunteer, I cleaned the room for the old people in the morning. What’s more, I read articles for them, which helped them learn what was going on at home and abroad. Most of the old people were weak, so I took them to take exercise. And we played interesting games together. The old people there were satisfied with my work.
My volunteer experience has shown that I can bring joy to old people. It has made me a more caring person. In a word, my work as a volunteer is extremely rewarding!

解析试题分析:写作时应注意(1)认真审题,确定体裁。这里是校办刊物投稿,叙述自己以前的一次经历。(2)构思要点。根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架。(3)选词造句,避难选易。在要点、层次明确的情况下,选用自己最熟悉的单词、句式进行造句.如果不会用复杂句就用简单句表达要点.注意主谓语一致、人称、数量、大小写、标点。(4)认真检查,避免错误。仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致。
考点:提纲类作文。
点评:应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。

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