题目内容
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是社区“老年之家”志愿者协会的负责人李明,近期准备组织老人们到公园踏春赏花。请就此活动写一份申请报告给社区相关负责人(申请报告中请不要出现真实的校名和人名)。你的申请报告需包括:
1. 此次活动的主旨和安排;
2. 需要社区提供的支持(如人员、经费等)。
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【答案】 In order to promote the traditional virtue of "respecting the old and loving the young" of the Chinese nation and enrich the life of the elderly, our volunteer association of "home for the elderly" are going to take the elderly to enjoy the spring flowers this weekend. After the discussion, we choose Nanhu Park as our destination, which has a picturesque scenery and attracts a large number of tourists every day. What's more, it is close to our community and it is convenient for us to for us to get there.
As there are some elderly people in our community who are too old to walk far, we decide to rent several wheelchairs and push them there to enjoy the flowers, but we are short of money, so we hope that our community can provide some financial support to pay for the cost of renting wheelchairs. I would appreciate it if we can get your approval.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文,要求写一封申请报告。
第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封申请报告:假设你是社区“老年之家”志愿者协会的负责人李明,近期准备组织老人们到公园踏春赏花。请就此活动写一份申请报告给社区相关负责人(申请报告中请不要出现真实的校名和人名)。你的申请报告需包括:1. 此次活动的主旨和安排;2. 需要社区提供的支持(如人员、经费等)。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:traditional virtue(传统美德),volunteer association(志愿者协会),picturesque(风景如画的),scenery(景色),attract(吸引),enrich(使丰富),rent(租用),wheelchair(轮椅),financial support(资金支持)及convenient(方便的)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。