题目内容
17.个人的成长离不开他人的支持.请以People who help me为题写一篇英语短文.分别谈谈老师,家人及朋友曾在哪些方面给予你关心和帮助,你将怎样回报他们.要求:1.词数80-120之间,按照字帖标准进行书写,规范书写,书写分占5分.
抄袭短文者一律零分.
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名,地名.文章开头已经给出,不计入单词总数.
3.提示词语:encourage,support,have difficulty in doing,in the future,
work hard,knowledge
During these days,I have got lots of help form my parents,teachers and friends. .
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
When I was crazy about playing computer games,my parents didn't blame me.
当我痴迷于玩电脑游戏时,我的父母没有责怪我.
高分句型二:
At present,I should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.
现在,我应该更加努力学习,使我们的世界更美丽.
解答 People Who Help me
During these years,I have got lots of help from my parents,teachers and friends.When I was crazy about playing computer games,my parents didn't blame me(高分句型一).They didn't give up helping me,but they still cared for my study and life.When I had difficulty in my study,my teachers taught me much knowledge patiently.When I couldn't get on well with others,my good friends gave me support and encourage.
In the future,I should never forget the help that they have given to me.At present,I should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful(高分句型二).
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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