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【题目】在最近一次题为中学生课余时间上网的班会上，同学们对上网的利弊争论不休，意见不能统一。请你根据下列信息，写一篇短文，介绍此次辩论情况并发表自己看法。

正方观点	反方观点	你的观点
1.网络使我们的交流方便，可获得国内外新知识及最新信息。 2.网络同时也丰富了学生业余生活。	1.多数人上网是玩游戏，聊天而不是真正学习或查阅资料。 2.个别学生甚至沉迷网络游戏。	？

注意：词数120左右。

参考词汇：上网：go on line

沉迷于：be addicted to

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Answer 1

【答案】

A lively debate has been held in our class about whether it is good for students to go on line in their spare time. Opinions vary on this topic.

Some are in favor of the idea that students should go on line. For one ting, the internet not only makes it convenient for them to communicate with each other but also get the latest information both home and abroad. For another, students can use the internet as a way to enrich their afterclass activities.

However, others raise questions about going on line. They argue that most students devote time to playing or chatting on line rather than studying or looking for help. What’s worse, a few students are even addicted to computer games, which will have a bad effect on their studies.

As far as I’m concerned, I’m for this activity. As long as we use the internet properly, its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，文章可分四段来写，第一段引入话题，第二段讲述正方观点，第三段讲述反方观点，第四段总结全文，并提出自己的看法。写作时注意使用连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次。

【亮点说明】这是一篇辩论的文章，有正方观点和反方观点，最后阐明了自己的观点。文章共四段，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。A lively debate has been held in our class about whether it is good for students to go on line in their spare time. Opinions vary on this topic.现在完成时态的被动语态和介词的宾语从句完美结合句中；Some are in favor of the idea that students should go on line. that引导同位语从句；a few students are even addicted to computer games, which will have a bad effect on their studies.非限制性定语从句用在句中；As long as we use the internet properly, its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.条件状语从句使用得当；另外，Some---others---，For one ting, For another, However, What’s worse, As far as I’m concerned,的运用让文章更流畅。