Question

13．你班将举办一次班会活动，讨论主题为"The Journey of life starts from setting a goal"．请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：
1．谈谈你对这个话题的看法．
2．举例说明理由．
注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）
Our class will hold a discussion of which the topic is"the journey of life starts from setting a goal"．                                                                                

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于"The Journey of life starts from setting a goal"．的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：谈谈你对这个话题的看法．举例说明理由．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为设立目标的重要性．第二部分为作者的看法及理由．
重点短语与句型：
There is no denying that 不可否认…
take control of 控制
head for朝…方向前进
on the contrary相反
高分句型一：Our class will hold a discussion of which the topic is"the journey of blife starts from setting a goal．此句用了介词加关系代词引导定语从句
高分句型二：With a clear direction，and with certain plans，you will straight get what you want．此句用了what引导的宾语从句

解答 Our class will hold a discussion of which the topic is"the journey of life starts from setting a goal．（高分句型一）There is no denying that setting a goal is very important．（设立目标的重要性）
By setting goals you are taking control of your life．It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for．With a clear direction，and with certain plans，you will straight get what you want（高分句型二）．On the contrary，without a goal，you will live a wandering life．You do not know where to go，what you want．Then your life becomes dull and meaningless just like the dead water in a muddy lake．We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals．They set goals，short-term or long-run，to help realize their dreams．Therefore，from my point of view，we should make clear what we really want and follow our plans as many winners do．（作者的看法及理由）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．