Question

7．下面短文中有10处错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
Dear Professor Ma，How are you？
I'm glad to write to you．It is nearly two months since you leave our hospital．I'm still worried about your healthy．How are you getting along these days？I think you may be more better now．But you'd better to have a good rest and take good care of you since you are seventy years old．I still remember those days you helped me with my English．Under your help，I've made rapid progresses．However，my English remains very poorly though I have made good use of my spare time．Can you give me some advice？
Looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours truly，
Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 马教授你好吗？很高兴给你写信，你离开我们医院已经快两个月了．我仍然担心你的健康．最近怎么样？好多了吧．你最好注意休息，照顾好自己．你已经七十岁了，我还记得你帮我学英语的那些日子．尽管我充分利用空余时间，但英语还是很差．你能给我些建议吗？盼望收到你的来信．

解答 Dear Professor Ma，How are you？
I'm glad to write to you．It is nearly two months since you leave our hospital．
                                                                                      left
I'm still worried about your healthy．How are you getting along these days？
                                          health
I think you may be more better now．But you'd better to have a good rest
                            much                                           去掉
and take good care of you since you are seventy years old．I still remember those days∧
                                yourself                                                                               加when
you helped me with my English．Under your help，I've made rapid progresses．
                                                 With                                           progress
However，my English remains very poorly though I have made good use of my spare time．
                                                     poor
Can you give me some advice？Looking forward to hear from you soon．
                                                                           hearing
Yours truly，
Li Ping．
1．leave改为left．句意表达的是过去，要用一般过去时态．
2．healthy改为health．句中health是作介词about的宾语，要用名词形式．
3．more改为much．句中better是比较级，不能用more来修饰．
4．to去掉．had better是特殊的情态动词，后接动词原形．
5．you改为yourself．短语搭配，take care of oneself照顾好自己．
6．加when．句中you helped me with my English是修饰days的一个定语从句，从句结构完整，要用关系副词来连接．
7．Under改为With．短语搭配，with one's help在某人的帮助下．
8．progresses改为progress．句中progress是不可数名词，不能用复数．
9．poorly改为poor．句中remain是系动词，表示仍然，后接形容词作表语．
10．hear改为hearing．句中look forward to盼望，to是介词，后接名词或动名词．

点评 短文改错题考查学生的语篇理解和语言运用能力．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数）；动词（时态，语态，搭配）；代词（不定代词，人称代词）；形容词和副词（转化）；连词（and，but，or）；冠词（an，a，the）等．解题时，要把握好句子结构，以动词为中心．动词和与动词有关的错误在短文改错中占很大的比例．