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4.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在右边的横线上写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉,在右边的横线上写出该词,并用斜线划掉.
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在右边的横线上写出修改后的词.

After school,I was about to enter my apartment while I saw a little dirty dog lie beside a dustbin.He looked extremely weak.Immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy.So I decided to take him home.I gave him some food and a bath.After the bath he looked energy and refreshed.What a lovely dog!When my parents got to home,I asked that I could keep the dog.To my surprised and joy,we agreed.Up to now,he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company(陪伴).
Looked at the cute and happy dog today,I realize that I was right to help him.

分析 本文通过讲述作者是如何救助一条无家可归的狗的故事,从而表达了作者为能够帮助那条狗而深感欣慰的心情.

解答 After school,I was about to enter my apartment while I saw
 a little dirty dog lie beside a dustbin.He looked extremely 
weak.Immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy.
So I decided to take him home.I gave him some food and a bath.
After the bath he looked energy and refreshed.What a lovely dog!
When my parents got to home,I asked that I could keep the dog.
To my surprised and joy,we agreed.Up to now,he has become∧
member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company(陪伴).
Looked at the cute and happy dog today,I realize that I was right to 
help him.

详解:
1.while改为when    考查句意理解以及固定句型结构   本句的意思是:放学后,我正要进入我的公寓时,突然我看见一条有些脏的狗正躺在一个垃圾箱旁; 固定句型be about to do when…意为:就要做某事时突然…,故用when.
2.lie改为lying    考查固定搭配    see sb.doing sth.意为:看见某人正在做某事;此处指的是看见一条狗正躺在垃圾箱旁边;故用lying.
3.energy改为energetic  考查连系动词   此处用在连系动词looked之后,与形容词refreshed一起作表语,所以这里也应使用名词energy的形容词形式;故用energetic.
4.去掉home前面的to    考查副词    由于home是地点副词,因此它的前面不能加介词,故去掉home前面的to.
5.that改为if/whether     考查句意理解以及从属连词    本句的意思是:我父母回到家时,我问他们我是否能养这条狗; 此处的意思是"是否";故用从属连词if/whether.
6.surprised改为surprise   考查固定结构"to one's+情感名词"表示令人…的是,使某人感到…的是;由于surprised是形容词,故改为名词surprise.
7.we改为they   考查人称代词的一致性    此处在句中作主语,指代的是作者的父母;故用they.   
8.member前加a    考查不定冠词  此处表示泛指我家里的一员或一份子,故在member前加a.
9.had改为has  考查时态   根据句中的时间状语up to now:到现在为止,可知本句应使用现在完成时;由于主语是不定代词everyone,所以谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式;故用has.
10.Looked改为Looking   考查现在分词    此处用在句首作时间状语,由于动词look与其逻辑主语I之间是主动关系;故用现在分词Looking.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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