Question

【题目】写作
你们班开展了一次以"LessStress（压力）, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力：学习很努力，成绩不理想；作业太多，没时间休息.
●我的压力：成绩好，但与同学相处有困难；与父母缺乏沟通(communicatewith…)。
●缓解压力的方法：至少两项。

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Less Stress,Better Life
Stress is aserious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too muchstress. Some students study very hard but they are still poor in their studies.They often worry about their exams. Others think that they have so muchhomework to do that they have no time to relax themselves.
I’m alwaysunder stress, too. I’m good at every subject, but it is hard for me to get onwell with my classmates, I can hardly communicate with my parents, either. Ireally feel tired sometimes. But how to solve the problem? I think aconversation with parents or teachers is helpful and taking exercise can makeus relaxed when we’re under pressure.
【解析】这篇作文为一篇以"LessStress（压力）, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲稿，谈谈自己的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。写作要点要求：1同学们中普遍存在的压力：学习很努力，成绩不理想；作业太多，没时间休息。2我的压力：成绩好，但与同学相处有困难；与父母缺乏沟通(communicatewith…)。3缓解压力的方法：至少两项。写作亮点：本篇要点全面，结构连贯，条理清楚。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，句子简洁明了，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that they haveso much homework to do that they have no time to relax themselves.状语从句when we’reunder pressure.和 so……that句型， get on wellwith，communicate with等词汇。