题目内容
假定你的名字叫李华，住在北京东长安街233号。
今年6月美国青年学生Jack Cooper随青年访华团访问北京，最后一天在青年宫举行告别会（farewell party）。你参加了，坐在Jack Cooper旁边，散会时你和他互相拿错了对方的笔记本。事后你翻看笔记本，发现他的名字地址，才知道拿错了。现在你把笔记本寄回去给他，写一封简明的信说明，同时请他把你的笔记本按你所给的地址寄给你。
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One possible version： 233 Dong Changan Street Beijing, China July 7, 2004 Dear Jack, In June when you were visiting Beijing, on the last of your trip a farewell party was given at Youth Palace． At the party I sat next to you． Then at the end when we went away we took each other's notebook by mistake． I discovered this only afterwards when I looked into the notebook and found your name and address inside． I am now sending your notebook by posting to you． Will you please send my notebook to me at the address which is given above? Thank you very much． I hope you will visit Beijing again soon． Your Chinese friend, Li Hua |
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建议使用句型： A farewell party was given． I sat next to Will you please send ．．． 建议使用动词： take ．．． by mistake, look into the notebook and found．．． 写作技巧提示： 高考英语书面表达新的评分标准提出`语法结构或词汇方面虽有面虽有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具有较强的语言运用能力'。此点应引起考生的极大关注。现举实例如下, [ ]部分为核心部分： ① I [was walking] along Park Road towards the east [when] an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street． 句式： be doing something when ．．． 正在做某事就在这时．．． 表达法： make a right turn 朝右转弯 ② The car didn't stop but [drove off] at great speed [heading west]． 表达法： drive off heading west 高速向西开去 ③ On the other side, [where the playground used to be] now [stands another new building- our library]． →该句含一个由where引导的非限定性的定语从句, 在此处插入, 令人感到自然、 得体, 其中还使用了表达法`used to be', 准确、地道。该句的后半部由一个倒装句组成, 在对主语作进一步说明时, 使用了破折号, 语言既利落, 结构又紧凑。 ④ After a short rest, we [had great fun singing] and dancing, telling jokes or stories． 句式： have fun (in) doing sth ⑤ The time passed quickly． [Before] we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers． →使用before译成："还未来得及．．．, 就"。 ⑥ My brother was riding [with] me sitting on the seat [behind]． →该句使用with结构, 其结构为[with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语]。 该结构的情景描述功能十分突出。此外, behind一词用作seat定语的用法也十分轻巧。 ⑦ There is [sure] to be a lot of fun． → 在There is句式中加入be sure to等表达是十分有用的写作技巧, 又如： There happened to be．．． There seems to be ．．． |
