题目内容
16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways,and the most common way was to hold a birthday party,when friends get together have fun,drink,sing and dance.On the birthday,one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from others.Sometimes,parent will prepare a special dinner and a cake to show their love for their children.Since birthday's celebration is one of the important activity in one's life,it can be done in more meaningful ways.For an example we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for us parents.Thus,we express thanks to our parents in return their love.
分析 文章介绍了庆祝生日的各种形式.过生日时,孩子们会举办生日聚会,赠送礼物,表达祝福.但我们应该有更好的庆祝方式,那就是表达对父母的感谢.
解答 Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways,and the most common way was to hold a birthday party,when friends get together∧have fun,drink,sing and dance.On the birthday,one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from others.Sometimes,parent will prepare a special dinner and a cake to show their love for their children.Since birthday's celebration is one of the important activity in one's life,it can be done in more meaningful ways.For an example we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for us parents.Thus,we express thanks to our parents in return∧their love.
详解:
1.and改为but;连词错误.句意表达的是转折,不是并列,要用but来连接.
2.was改为is;时态错误.文章介绍的是客观事实,要用一般现在时态.
3.加to;不定式错误.句中have fun表示目的,要用动词不定式来作目的状语.
4.usual改为usually;副词错误.句中usual修饰动词receives,要用副词形式.
5.parent改为parents;名词错误.句意表达的是父母,要用复数形式来构成.
6.birthday's改为birthday;名词错误.birthday celebration庆祝生日,不是表示所属关系,不能用名词所有格.
7.activity改为activities;名词错误.句中one of表示其中之一,后面的名词要用复数.
8.去掉an;短语搭配错误.for example例如,固定短语.
9.us改为our;代词错误.句意指代的是前面的we,要用对应的形容词性物主代词our来构成.
10.加for;介词错误.句中their love表示感谢的原因,要加介词for来构成.
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.
A. | where,embarrassed | B. | which; embarrassing | ||
C. | when; embarrassed | D. | that; embarrassing |