题目内容
假定英杲上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划1横线，并&该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 指出错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改0处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When my grandfather left school,he got his first job as a office worker. In those days,he was extreme thin. He paid very little,so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time,and he looks just like me,but a lot thin!When he grew older,he worked at all sorts of thing,such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life,but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed,like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.
71. ...a office worker. a →an
72. . .. extreme thin. extreme →extremely
73. He paid ... paid前加 was
74. . .. eating a lot. eating→ eat
75. . .. photos of her ... her → him
76. . .. a lot thin! thin →thinner
77. . .. sorts of thing ... thing →things
78. . .. woriced as a ... worked→working
79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard
80. . .. found out time ... . 去掉out
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