Question

假如你叫李平，你的朋友David写信向你寻求戒掉网瘾的办法，来帮助他的弟弟。请你在回信中提出你的建议。要点如下：

* 像朋友一样和他交流，让他认识到上网成瘾的危害。

* 引导他说出自己的困惑或烦恼，这样可以找出他对网络游戏依赖的原因。

* 帮助他培养有益于身心健康的爱好来转移注意力。

* 向老师和父母求助，帮他限制上网时间并鼓励他浏览既有吸引力又能开阔视野的网站。

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注意：1. 请不要逐句翻译，应适当进行发挥。

2. 词数150 左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

Dear David,

I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction. ____________________                                   ___                      __

___________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction. But don’t be upset. I’ll give you some suggestions.

First of all, you should communicate with your brother like friends making him realize the negative effects of the addiction. Then, you can turn to your parents to limit the time spent on the Internet and ask your brother’s teachers to offer him some websites that are beneficial and attractive to him. I think in such interaction he might like to speak out his worries or puzzlement to all of you, which can help you find the reason why he is addicted to computer games. Last but not least, you can help him to develop some healthy interests such as sending him to some computer training class, going climbing with him to experience the nature, bringing him to go bungee jumping and many other sports which he may like.

I hope such tips can help him get out of the addiction as soon as possible.(156words) 

Yours sincerely,

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。