题目内容
13.假如你是李华,计划高考结束之后开始健身,锻炼身体.请给你在美国的健身达人朋友Jack写一个邮件,内容包括:①你对健身的识
②你的计划
③咨询他的建议
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Jack,
How is everything going?Time flies!In a few days.I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time.(高分句型一)Going to the gym to improve my fitness is one on my list.Considering that you are an expert in this area,I'm writing to ask you for some advice.(高分句型二)
Honestly,I'm afraid that the one-year rush on study has overused my body.It is vital for me to rebuild it after the exam.As it is planned,I will go to the gym every evening,running on a machine for around half an hour.(高分句型三)Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged,which will last for another 30 minutes.(高分句型四)
What do you think of my plan?I'll appreciate it if you could give me some of your advice or correct anything unsuitable in my plan.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你是李华,计划高考结束之后开始健身,锻炼身体.请给你在美国的健身达人朋友Jack写一个邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:①你对健身的识②你的计划③咨询他的建议2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:Time flies!时光飞逝;get over度过;be dying to do渴望做某事;Considering 考虑到,鉴于;Honestly诚实的说;Look forward to盼望;
I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time.(高分句型一)
Considering that you are an expert in this area,I'm writing to ask you for some advice.(高分句型二)
As it is planned,I will go to the gym every evening,running on a machine for around half an hour.(高分句型三)
Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged,which will last for another 30 minutes.(高分句型四)
解答 Dear Jack,
How is everything going?Time flies!In a few days.I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time.(高分句型一)Going to the gym to improve my fitness is one on my list.Considering that you are an expert in this area,I'm writing to ask you for some advice.(高分句型二)
Honestly,I'm afraid that the one-year rush on study has overused my body.It is vital for me to rebuild it after the exam.As it is planned,I will go to the gym every evening,running on a machine for around half an hour.(高分句型三)Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged,which will last for another 30 minutes.(高分句型四)
What do you think of my plan?I'll appreciate it if you could give me some of your advice or correct anything unsuitable in my plan.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
支持理由 | 1.手写信有助于表达情感; 2.手写信有助于规范学生书写; |
反对理由 | 1.手写信浪费时间和纸张; 2.手写信已过时; |
你的观点 | 1… 2… |
注意:
1)作文应涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,注意衔接与连贯.
2)词数150词左右.开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
With the program Readers becoming popular recently,two handwritten letters read in it drew the audience's attention.
Many people suggest that we should communicate by writing letters,which has caused a heated discussion among students in our school.(高分句型一)Students'opinions vary.
70% of the students are in favor of it.On one hand,handwritten letters can help students express their feelings better while communicating with others.On the other hand,bywriting letters,students can practise their handwriting well,which is very beneficial totheir future development.(高分句型二)
However,30% of the students are against it.For one thing,it's a waste of time and paper for students to write letters.For another,they hold the view that handwritten letters are out of date,which should be given up.(高分句型三)
On my personal note,it is a good tradition that we need to hold on to.What's more,letters are easy to store,which will become great treasures for us to value when we memorize our past in the future.(高分句型四)(151 words).