假如你是李华.计划高考结束之后开始健身.锻炼身体．请给你在美国的健身达人朋友Jack写一个邮件.内容包括:①你对健身的识②你的计划③咨询他的建议注意:1．词数100左右,2．可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯,Dear Jack.How is everything going?Time flies!In a few days．I will finally 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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13．假如你是李华，计划高考结束之后开始健身，锻炼身体．请给你在美国的健身达人朋友Jack写一个邮件，内容包括：
①你对健身的识
②你的计划
③咨询他的建议
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Jack，
How is everything going？Time flies!In a few days．I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time．（高分句型一）Going to the gym to improve my fitness is one on my list．Considering that you are an expert in this area，I'm writing to ask you for some advice．（高分句型二）
Honestly，I'm afraid that the one-year rush on study has overused my body．It is vital for me to rebuild it after the exam．As it is planned，I will go to the gym every evening，running on a machine for around half an hour．（高分句型三）Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged，which will last for another 30 minutes．（高分句型四）
What do you think of my plan？I'll appreciate it if you could give me some of your advice or correct anything unsuitable in my plan．
Looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely，
Li Hua．

分析本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，计划高考结束之后开始健身，锻炼身体．请给你在美国的健身达人朋友Jack写一个邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：①你对健身的识②你的计划③咨询他的建议2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Time flies!时光飞逝；get over度过；be dying to do渴望做某事；Considering 考虑到，鉴于；Honestly诚实的说；Look forward to盼望；
I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time．（高分句型一）
Considering that you are an expert in this area，I'm writing to ask you for some advice．（高分句型二）
As it is planned，I will go to the gym every evening，running on a machine for around half an hour．（高分句型三）
Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged，which will last for another 30 minutes．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Jack，
     How is everything going？Time flies!In a few days．I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time．（高分句型一）Going to the gym to improve my fitness is one on my list．Considering that you are an expert in this area，I'm writing to ask you for some advice．（高分句型二）
       Honestly，I'm afraid that the one-year rush on study has overused my body．It is vital for me to rebuild it after the exam．As it is planned，I will go to the gym every evening，running on a machine for around half an hour．（高分句型三）Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged，which will last for another 30 minutes．（高分句型四）
      What do you think of my plan？I'll appreciate it if you could give me some of your advice or correct anything unsuitable in my plan．
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                               Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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4．On June 10，2003，I graduated from U of T，Scarborough．As I stood at University College waiting with hundreds of others，I suddenly felt overcome with emotion．My very long and personal journey to convocation had started 20 years earlier on the St．George campus．
I first enrolled at U of T through the Transitional Year Programme in 1983．At the time I was a 30-year-old mother of two girls and married to"the boy next door．"I was both excited and terrified，and felt a little like Rita in the movie Educating Rita-traveling daily to classes in high heels．I decided that it would be better for my family if I attended classes closer to home，so I transferred to Scarborough for my second year．After picking up the girls from school，I'd bring them back to the studio where I rehearsed．Much to my horror，they would crawl around on the catwalks high above me．They were 10and 12and loved being at"Mom's school．"
My life changed drastically that year．On June 10，1986，my husband of 13years was killed in a horrific accident．I picked up my life the best I could under the circumstances and returned to U of T，but failed to get all the credits I needed．Twenty years later，on the eve of my 50th birthday，I e-mailed an old professor，who encouraged me to sign up for a new class he was teaching about writing for the theatre．This time I made it all the way through．
As I stepped inside Convocation Hall，I searched the crowd for my girls，now in their thirties．They were in the highest balcony，waving frantically at me-just as they had done from the catwalk in my drama class so long ago．I will never forget the look on the girls faces as they called out"Hi Mom．"I finally felt complete．

24．Which of the following can best replace the underlined word"convocation"in Paragraph 1？C
A．Birthday party．
B．College credits．
C．Graduation ceremony．
D．Drama class．
25．When the author graduated from U of T，she was probably aroundD years old．
A．twenty B．thirty C．forty D．fifty
26．What do we know about the author's daughters？D
A．They helped her with housework when she attended college．
B．They played with her during her rehearsals．
C．They comforted her when she lost her husband．
D．They were proud of her success in the end．
27．Which word can best describe the author's attitude towards her studies？B
A．Curious．B．Persistent．C．Sympathetic．D．Optimistic．

1．近期，由董卿主持的《朗读者》节目广受欢迎，其中的两封家书更是引起观众的关注．为此，许多人提议在生活中应使用手写书信作为交流工具．此提议在你校学生中引起广泛讨论．请你结合图表用英语写一篇短文．

支持理由	1．手写信有助于表达情感； 2．手写信有助于规范学生书写；
反对理由	1．手写信浪费时间和纸张； 2．手写信已过时；
你的观点	1… 2…

注意：
1）作文应涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，注意衔接与连贯．
2）词数150词左右．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
3）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
With the program Readers becoming popular recently，two handwritten letters read in it drew the audience's attention．
Many people suggest that we should communicate by writing letters，which has caused a heated discussion among students in our school．（高分句型一）Students'opinions vary．
70% of the students are in favor of it．On one hand，handwritten letters can help students express their feelings better while communicating with others．On the other hand，bywriting letters，students can practise their handwriting well，which is very beneficial totheir future development．（高分句型二）
However，30% of the students are against it．For one thing，it's a waste of time and paper for students to write letters．For another，they hold the view that handwritten letters are out of date，which should be given up．（高分句型三）
On my personal note，it is a good tradition that we need to hold on to．What's more，letters are easy to store，which will become great treasures for us to value when we memorize our past in the future．（高分句型四）（151 words）．

8．毕业季也是感恩季．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你在高中三年所遇到的人或事物写一封感谢信，新的内容包括：
1．感谢的人或事物；
2．感谢的原因；
3．你的美好愿望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
DearSamantha，
I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!，
Yours
Li Hua．

18．When we were kids，my little sister Madison and I were the M&Ms-my parents'two daughters．（36）CSo it was quite a surprise when my mom and dad sat us down to let us know that baby number three was on the way when I was 10years old．However，as soon as my brother Mac was born，he completely stole my heart and I have learned many things from having a young brother．
●（37）B
Having a baby in your life means watching your parents endlessly change diapers （尿布），make bottles，and wipe spit-ups every once in a while．I was allowed to do those things and I learned just how important it was to take care of this little life before I even hit middle school．
●You watch a child grow up．
（38）EI remember how excited my family was when we discovered how fast of a reader he was in kindergarten．I'll never forget telling him bedtime stories before he went to sleep at night．It's cool to think about the entirety of his life and how far he has come．
●You teach your brother life lessons．
From a young age，my brother watched my sister and me overcome personal challenges，go to high school，and，worst of all，get our hearts broken．（39）GWatching his sisters go through life's difficulties has taught him how he should act when he gets older．
Now Mac is 11years old．I have no shame in telling people that one of my best friends is an 11-year-old boy．In fact，our family without him is unimaginable．（40）F

A．You stay in the know．
B．You learn about responsibility early on．
C．We received a lot of attention，and we liked it that way．
D．All I can say is that my family wouldn't be happy without Mac．
E．I remember the first time Mac crawled，walked，and said my name．
F．Thanks，Morn and Dad，for turning the M&Ms into the Three Musketeers．
G．Nothing makes Mac more upset than a mean guy who hurts a girl's feelings．

5．假定你是李华，你想邀请留学生朋友Peter观看京剧表演，但Peter不在家．请给他写张留言条，内容包括：
1．来访目的；
2．介绍京剧；
3．另约时间．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：Beijing Opera 京剧；quintessence 精华，精粹；ornate 华丽的
Dear Peter，
I came to see you but you were out．I'd like to invite you to see Beijing Opera with me next week，since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）
With a history of nearly 200 years，Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre，which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture．（高分句型二）The performers in ornate costume perform various stories happened in history to audience by singing，dancing and motions．（高分句型三）I can tell you more about it when we meet．
Please let me know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance．
Yours，
Li Hua．

2．There is no way to make somebody stop smoking，and just like with users of any drug，it is very unlikely a person will stop unless he or she wants to．（36）G
Step One：Make Observations
Smoking use can affect memory and make it difficult for people to do well at work or school．Other bad effects that you may notice include：（37）B
Is she getting sick more often than she used to？
Write down your concerns using"I"statements，such as"I feel sad that when you smoke you give up your artwork．"（38）D
Step Two：Approach the Person
Bring up your concerns to your friend at a relaxing time．Express your concerns using the statements you wrote down．Tell him you will be there to support him if and when she decides to give up smoking．He will likely give you one of three responses：
He wants to quit．
（39）A
He wants to stop，but not yet．
You must be willing to calmly accept any of these responses．If he says he does want to stop，go on with the next step．If not，they will have to be visited later when he is ready．
Step Three：Prevent Him Giving Up Halfway
（40）E
However，symptoms only appear after some time of quitting smoke．This causes some who are addicted to believe that they are not actually addicted and to start using again．

A．He doesn't want to quit．
B．Does this person appear more nervous？
C．Are you lazy because you smoke too much？
D．It's best to approach the person in this manner．
E．People can become physically dependent on smoking．
F．The drug can't stay in the system for a long period of time．
G．But there are steps you can take to support a friend or family member．

3．近年来，微信（Wechat）成为了人们非常喜欢的通信工具，但是也给人们带来一些困扰．请对这一现象谈一下自己的看法，内容包括1．使用微信的利与弊；
2．自己的看法和建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．为使行文连贯可适当增加细节．
In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．There are many reasons for Wechat to be known．To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）Next，Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people，especiallythe youth，with its various functions．Furthermore，it is available everywhere at any time．
However，every coin has two sides．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，spending too muchtime on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）Finally，our attention might be drawntoo much to focus on study．
There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）．

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