题目内容
14.假定你校学生会定于5月8日(星期日)参观郑州绿博园(Zhnegzhou Green Expo Garden). 请根据下面表格内容,以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知.集合时间及地点早上7:00 在校门口集合,7:20乘公共汽车前往.
活动内容与要求1.上午参观展区、中午在湖边野餐、下午分组游戏;
2.拍照、做记录,之后参加校摄或征文比赛.
注意事项1.自带午餐和饮用水;
2.注意安全;
3.参加者本周五前到学生会报名.
注意:
1.词数:100左右.
2.可以适当发挥,以使短文连贯;
3.通知的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数.
参考词汇:exhibition area展区; sign up报名; essay contest征文比赛.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们以学生会的名义用英语写一则于5月8日(星期日)参观郑州绿博园的通知,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般将来时,内容要点包括:集合时间及地点早上7:00 在校门口集合,7:20乘公共汽车前往.上午参观展区、中午在湖边野餐、下午分组游戏;拍照、做记录,之后参加校摄或征文比赛.注意事项1.自带午餐和饮用水;2.注意安全;3.参加者本周五前到学生会报名.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为通知总的内容.第二部分为活动内容与要求以及注意事项.
重点短语与句型:
Zhengzhou Green Expo Garden 郑州绿博园
at noon中午
require sb to do sth.要求某人做某事
take part in 参加
be cautious小心,谨慎
高分句型一:You're required to take photos and make notes so that you can take part in the photo or essay contest in our school.此句用了so…that如此…以致于,结果状语从句
高分句型二:We're leaving by bus at 7:20 a.m.this Sunday,so please gather at the school gate at 7:00此句注意时态,表示位置移动的动词用现在进行时表将来.
解答 Notice
We're going to organize a visit to Zhengzhou Green Expo Garden on Sunday,May 8.(通知总的内容)
In the morning,we're to visit the exhibition areas and in the afternoon,we'll play games in groups.At
noon,we'll have a picnic lunch by the side of the lake.You're required to take photos and make notes so
that you can take part in the photo or essay contest in our school.(高分句型一 )Please take your picnic lunch and drinking
water with you and be cautious.If you want to join us,please sign up at the Students'Union before this Friday.
We're leaving by bus at 7:20 a.m.this Sunday(高分句型二),so please gather at the school gate at 7:00.(活动内容与要求以及注意事项)
Students'Union
May 5,2011
点评 第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达.
第二步:拟定提纲,创造良好的开端;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾.
第三步:遣词造句,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇(注意"参考词汇"的提示作用).
A. | personal | B. | logical | C. | universal | D. | common |
A. | modest | B. | cautious | C. | careful | D. | cheerful |
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