题目内容
【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, we tried fishing on school trip. As soon as we had arrived at the pond, I made preparations for it, including fishing tool and food to attract fish. Like other classmates, leaving the pond or chatting to each other from time to time, I fix my eyes on the water. After a while, I felt anything biting the end of my line, so I started to pull them out of the water. It was heavier than I had expected, but I lost my balance, fall right into the pond! That was my first fishing experience, a happier but embarrassing experience.
【答案】1. on school trip. on后加a
72. we had arrived ... 去掉had
73. ishing tool and ... tool→tools
74. Like other classmates, ... Like→Unlike
75. I fix my eyes ... fix→fixed
76. felt anything bite ... anything→something
77. pull them out ... them→it
78. but I lost ... but→and / so
79.fall right into ... fall→falling
80. a happier but ... happier→happy
【解析】school trip在文中第一次出现，是泛指概念，应用不定冠词。故在前面加a。
“As soon as we had arrived at the pond,”“我们一到达池塘边”，这里讲的是发生在过去的一个瞬时性动作，不能用完成时。故将had去掉。
tool是可数名词，钓鱼的工具肯定不止一个，所以用复数形式。故将tool改为tools。
根据“Like other classmates, leaving the pond or chatting to each other from time to time, I fix my eyes on the water.”的描述可知，我的行为与同学们的不同。故将like改为unlike。
通篇文章讲述的是发生在过去的事情，所以动词应用过去时。故将fix改为fixed。
“I felt anything biting the end of my line”“我感觉有什么东西咬了我的鱼线头”，不能用anything任何东西，与题意不符。故将anything改为something。
“so I started to pull them out of the water”，此处说的是我将鱼线拔出水面，鱼线只有一根，用代词it即可。故将them改为it。
“It was heavier than I had expected, but I lost my balance”，前后两部分是因果关系，而非转折关系。故将but改为and/or。
现在分词形式表主动含义，fall的主语是“我”，而且此处是作伴随状语。故将fall改为falling.
此处并不表示比较含义，不用比较级。故将happier改为happy。
