Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，你们学校最近做了一项调查，调查的主题是“你暑假会去打零工挣钱吗？”请你根据下面的调查结果写一份总结，开头已给出。

结果	原因
89%选择不去	1．父母不允许 2．学习太忙，没时间 3．不知道自己能做什么工作
11%选择去	1．学以致用 2．积累社会经验 3．减轻父母的压力

注意：

1. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2. 词数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, our school carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time work during the summer holiday.

89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their study during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do.

11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through working, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents’ burden.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

本文是一份调查结果，采用三段式，语言简练，层次分明，布局合理，运用高级句子。Recently, our school carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time work during the summer holiday.句中运用介词的宾语从句；Second, they are so busy with their study during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it.结果状语从句用在句中；They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice.一句使用两个宾语从句，堪称经典；另外，First, Second, Third, Through working, In addition的运用为文章增色添彩。