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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．没出错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．没出错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起）不计分．
The Huaihe River has been serious polluted．Day and night million of tons of waste water are being poured down to it from hundreds of factories．The waste water was harmful．At present there is no fish in it．The river water cannot drunk．People on either bank have to dig wells to get drinking water．The Huaihe River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare to swim in them．Everything must be done to stop the pollution．The government and the people near the river must try to clear the water as soon as possible．Now special attention has been paid on to the pollution by the government and many scientist．The pollution will be prevented in the near future．

分析 本文主要介绍的是淮河的水污染问题，号召我们必须做点事情来治理污染．

解答 The Huaihe River has been serious polluted．Day and night million of tons of waste water are being poured down to it from hundreds of factories．The waste water was harmful．At present there is no fish in it．The river water cannot∧drunk．People on either bank have to dig wells to get drinking water．The Huaihe River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare to swim in them．Everything must be done to stop the pollution．The government and the people near the river must try to clear the water as soon as possible．Now special attention has been paid on to the pollution by the government and many scientist．The pollution will be prevented in the near future．
详解：
1．serious改为seriously 修饰动词用副词，这里修饰的是polluted，应该用副词，形容词serious的副词是seriously．
2．million改为millions 考查数词．hundred，thousand，million前有具体的数字时，后面不能加s且不与of连用，单独使用时，后可加s，且与of连用，意为"成百上千"，"成千上万"．
3．to改为into 考查介词．pour sth into…意为"把…倒进…"，是固定搭配．
4．was改为is 考查时态．根据第一段可知，文章说的是现在的事情，此处应该使用一般现在时．
5．cannot后加be 考查被动语态．water与drink是被动关系，即水是被人喝的，在cannot后加be．
6．such改为so 考查固定搭配．so/such…that句型中，such后接名词，so后接形容词或副词，dirty是形容词，把such改为so．
7．them改为it 考查指示代词．这里it指代的是主语The Huaihe River，主语是单数．
8．Everything改为Something 考查不定代词．根据句意：必须做点事情来治理污染．把everything改为something．
9．去掉on 考查固定短语．pay attention to sth意为"注意…"，on是多余的，要去掉．
10．scientist改为scientists 考查名词．many修饰可数名词复数形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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       2．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
      3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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