Question

【题目】短文改错

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Monday, my classmate and I saw some people gathering around in our way to school. In order to see what was happening, so we got close enough and found an old woman lie on the ground. The people around her just stand there, watching and chatting. We were worried about her and decided to take her to the hospital immediate. It turned out that she lost her balance but fell. She had to stay in hospital, so we called her family. Soon his son came and thanked us by offering us money. We refused money and left. Hurried to school, we found we were late. To our delight though, our teacher praised us for that we had done and we felt very proud.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in→on

【2】去掉so

【3】lie→lying

【4】stand→stood

【5】immediate→immediately

【6】but→and

【7】his→her

【8】money前加the

【9】Hurried→Hurrying

【10】that→what

【解析】

【1】in→on考察介词。On one’s way在…的路上。句意：上周一，我和同学在回家的路上，看到一些人聚集在一起。

【2】去掉so考察连词。in order to 表示原因，所以不需要用so。句意：为了看清楚发生了什么，我们走进看到一个女人躺在地上。

【3】lie→lying考察过去进行时。一个女人在那是正躺在地上。

【4】stand→stood考察时态。文中时态是过去式，所以要用stand的过去式。

【5】immediate→immediately考察副词。immediately表示“立即、马上”。句意：我们决定立刻带她去医院。

【6】but→and考察连词。文意是她失去了平衡并且摔倒的，前后是并列关系，所以要用连词and。

【7】his→her考察人称代词。根据文意是她的儿子很快赶来，所以是her。

【8】money前加the 考察冠词。The表特指，文中特指要给我们的“钱”。

【9】Hurried→Hurrying考察动名词。句意是我们慌忙赶到学校的时候，已经迟到了。

【10】that→what考察引导词。what作介词for的宾语从句。