题目内容
19.母亲节和父亲节来临之际,人们总会利用这样的机会向自己的父母表达对他们的爱,以及对他们的感恩之情.可是,如今社会上有些人缺乏应有的感恩之心,少数人甚至在父母年老体弱时都不愿意赡养.请你结合自己的实际谈谈:
1.父母值得你感恩的地方,请用实例说明;
2.将来你会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩.
【注意】
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 本文要求考生就"感恩"的话题结合自身实际情况发表自己的看法.所以要使用第一人称,在讲述事例的时候使用一般过去时,在发表个人观点的时候使用一般现在时.要点:1.父母值得你感恩的地方:父母给予自己无尽的爱与帮助,自己小时候身体不好,经常住院,父母亲给我无微不至的关心.在父母的帮助下,我的身体慢慢好了起来.2.如何做来报答父母的养育之恩:努力学习,考取好大学让父母亲能够过上幸福的生活.建议文章分为两部分,显得有点层次.其次要尽量多使用自己熟悉的句式,提高获得高分的可能性.
【名师点睛】
本篇文章很好地完成了文字提示要求的所有任务,在以具体事例说明父母值得感恩时有非常好的个人发挥,使文章显得很自然.范文语言流畅,全文无中国式英语思维,时态和人称运用准确无误,体现出很好的驾驭语言的能力.作者在文中使用了较多的复合句,如定语从句I was always ill in hospital,which made my parents seriously worried.让步状语从句…whether it was windy or rainy.主语从句What I should do now is to study hard.文章中高级词汇运用也很到位,如make up one's mind、communicate with等等.这些技巧的使用让文章更有文采.
I'm very grateful to my parents because they give me not only endless love but also help.(高分句型一)
I was always ill in hospital,which made my parents seriously worried.(高分句型二)
What I should do now is to study hard.(高分句型三)
解答 I'm very grateful to my parents because they give me not only endless love but also help.(高分句型一)From the day I was born,I was a sickly child.I was always ill in hospital,which made my parents seriously worried.(高分句型二)In order to strengthen my body,my parents made up their mind to run with me every day whether it was windy or rainy.With their help,I have grown into a strong and healthy student.Besides,my parents understand my academic stress and often communicate with me and offer words of encouragement.What I should do now is to study hard.(高分句型三)When I grow up,I will try my best t o make my parents live a happy life.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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