Question

8．假如你是李华，一学期的高中生活即将结束，请按以下提示，给你的英国好友 Wilson 写一封e-mail，讲一讲你的高中生活．内容包括：
（1）总体感受   （2）师生关系  （3）学习   （4）老师及教学  （5）今后打算
注意：
（1）词数100左右；   （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；  （3）开头语已为你写好．
Dear Wilson，
How time flies!I'm glad to share my senior school life with you．
Generally speaking，I have got used to it，and have developed the way of learning．（高分句型一）I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates，and thanks to their help，I have made much progress during the first term．（高分句型二）For instance，Maths and English are two examples to show my progress．
I'm lucky to meet so many excellent teachers with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．As for my future plan，I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject and proper time management is also important because I have many subjects to deal with．（高分句型三）
Thanks for your concern!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给你的英国好友 Wilson 写一封e-mail，讲一讲你的高中生活，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）总体感受   （2）师生关系  （3）学习   （4）老师及教学  （5）今后打算  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Generally speaking一般的来说；get used to习惯于；thanks to幸亏，由于；For instance比如；pay more attention to更关注；deal with应对，处理
Generally speaking，I have got used to it，and have developed the way of learning．（高分句型一）
I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates，and thanks to their help，I have made much progress during the first term．（高分句型二）
As for my future plan，I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject and proper time management is also important because I have many subjects to deal with．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wilson，
    How time flies!I'm glad to share my senior school life with you．
    Generally speaking，I have got used to it，and have developed the way of learning．（高分句型一）I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates，and thanks to their help，I have made much progress during the first term．（高分句型二）For instance，Maths and English are two examples to show my progress．
    I'm lucky to meet so many excellent teachers with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．As for my future plan，I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject and proper time management is also important because I have many subjects to deal with．（高分句型三）
    Thanks for your concern!
    Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．