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第二节：书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是英国伦敦的Allan，前几天你参加了一家旅行社组织的哈尔滨三日游的活动。下面是这家旅行社的广告，请根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者协会写一封投诉信。
 
注意：1．词数100词左右；信的格式和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency．
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Yours faithfully，
Allan

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One possible version：
Dear Sir or Madam.
I’m writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency.
A few days ago, I joined a three-day trip to Harbin with this travel agency. I found a big difference between their ads and action.
As they say, they provide large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioning. Yes, they served us lunch, but the food tasted terrible, some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower; we only bathed in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops, which wasted us much time. As a result, two scenery spots were left unseen in the end.
We do hope something can be done to prevent such things happening again.
Yours sincerely,
Allan

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