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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As we all know it, health is very important to us students. Here are some tips on how to grow up healthily.

Some students at school were too addicted to phones and computers, which does harm to their health. Therefore, you are strong advised to rid you of them. In addition, sparing some time to build up your body on a regular basis to make you energetic and relaxing. Above all, attach great importance on making friends and communicating with others. Taking active part in various voluntary activities can also be of great beneficial.

I hope that the suggestion above will make a difference.

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【解析】As we all know, 为非限定性定语从句，as 在从句中做宾语，所以it 多余。

此处考查时态，根据文章的时态可知，此处介绍的是一般情况，用一般现在时。

考查副词，修饰动词advise，用副词strongly。

此句的主语为you 所以是你被建议让你自己摆脱上瘾。you are advised to rid yourself of them。

此处为祈使句。所以用spare。

此处表示使你精力充沛和感到放松的。感到放松的用relaxed。

此处考查短语Attach great importance to。。。此为固定搭配。

此处考查积极参加：take an active part in ，不能省略an

此处考查名词。Be of great benefit，of 后用名词。

此处考查名词。以上的建议不止一条所以用复数。