Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My hometown is a small village. Small as it is, but it’s very beautiful. There are a number of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we fly kites are made by themselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer, the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Beside, the wild apples are nice to eating. In autumn, corns at the foot of the hills are ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and made snowmen. In my hometown there are blue sky, fresh air, sweet water and kind people. I love my hometown!

 

Answer 1

1.but it’s very ... 去掉but

2.a number of hill ... hill → hills

3.kites are made ... kites后加that / which或去掉are

4.by themselves ... themselves → ourselves

5.fly very highly. highly → high

6.Beside, the wild apples ... Beside → Besides

7.nice to eating. eating → eat

8.something is covered ... something → everything

9.and made snowmen… made → make

10.there are blue sky ... are → is

【解析】

试题分析：题目主要考查学生对状语从句、名词、定语从句、代词、连词、动词、时态、主谓一致等语法知识的掌握情况。

1.考查状语从句。Small as it is引导让步状语从句，尽管它很小，本身含有转折的含义。故去掉but。

2.考查名词。a number of后面接可数名词复数形式，故把hill改为hills。

3.考查定语从句。这是一个定语从句，先行词是kites，引导词在从句中作主语，故kites后加that / which或去掉are。

4.考查反身代词。主语是we，故把themselves改为ourselves。

5.考查形容词。fly后面接飞得高时用形容词，highly表示的是程度。故把highly改为high。

6.考查连词。表示而且用besides，故把Beside改为Besides。

7.考查动词。to为不定式作后置定语，后面接动词原形。故把eating改为eat。

8.考查不定代词。这里指每个事物都被雪覆盖着。故把something改为everything。

9.时态。and前play用的现在时，时态应保持一致。故把made改为make。

10.考查主谓一致。Sky,air,water,people都是不可数名词，故把are改为is。

考点：状语从句、名词、定语从句、代词、连词、动词、时态、主谓一致