Question

【题目】Bearing a resemblance to the forest-surrounded "Love Tunnel" in Ukraine, the two-kilometer tunnel in Jiangning district Nanjing saw a recent rise in popularity as more than 2,000 tourists paid a visit every day this summer. The high number of visitors caused traffic safety concerns and increased the workload of sanitation workers. The Nanjing government had intended to cut the trees by end of 2014; After the Nanjing government was forced to draft plans to cut the trees due to public pressure, visitors poured into a railway section that runs through thick forest for sightseeing and to take photos this weekend, leaving the railway with overwhelming piles of trash.

However, in response to the government’s plan, complaints and outcries were made by the citizens that the love tunnel should be reserved. They claim that walking along the leafy green tunnel is like entering a fairytale, and a possible decision to tear down the trees could bring the story to a pitiful end.

注释sanitation 卫生

[写作内容]

以大约30个词左右概括短文的内容要点。

以大约120个词谈谈你对“爱情隧道”该不该保留的看法，并说出你的理由。

【写作要求】

作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。

作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

【答案】

Nanjing government planned to cut the trees surrounding the “love tunnel” for the high number of visitors caused both safety concerns and pollutions, which gave rise to the objections of citizens.（31 words）

I am totally in favor of the citizen’s point of view that the fascinating love tunnel ought to be reserved. For one thing, it would be a great pity to put an end to the fairytale-like scenic spot, which brings peace and beauty to the visitors. For another thing, in a bid to solve the problem of safety concerns and pollutions, the authority could come up with a way to preserve the green corridor while also improving the safety of both people and trains.（84 words）

Therefore, as long as the visitors and the authorities make joint efforts to preserve the love tunnel, it will surely serve as a marvelous tourist attraction for us without any concerns.（31 words）

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据材料内容来发表意见的文章写作。首先要对已提供材料的主要内容进行概括，因此要对文章内容进行准确的理解和再次传达，同时要对文章中提出的是否应该保存“爱情隧道”发表意见。在对“爱情隧道”是否该保存发表意见时，要结合两方面的意见进行全面分析，针对对人们的利弊情况，提出合理的意见。

【亮点说明】Nanjing government planned to cut the trees surrounding the “love tunnel” for the high number of visitors caused both safety concerns and pollutions, which gave rise to the objections of citizens.使用which引导的非限制性定语从句和动词的现在分词作定语；I am totally in favor of the citizen’s point of view that the fascinating love tunnel ought to be reserved.使用同位语从句；For one thing, it would be a great pity to put an end to the fairytale-like scenic spot, which brings peace and beauty to the visitors.使用非限制性定语从句和it would be a great pity句式；the authority could come up with a way to preserve the green corridor while also improving the safety of both people and trains.使用while加动词的现在分词作状语。plan to，gave rise to ，put an end to ，ought to，come up with，make joint efforts to，serve as等动词和句式的运用，使得文章的表达更加准确；both .. and…，in favor of，in a bid to，as long as，使得文章的表达更加生动。在表述多方面的意见时，For one thing,For another thing，使得文章条理清晰。