Question

4．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
     如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
     该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线划掉．
     该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
     该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
    To achieve determination，we need the followed steps．First，we should adopt a positive attitude towards fail．Although some smokers have tried in vain to give up smoking over a hundred of times，they should continue their attempts and view their previous failure part of their success because they have tried after all．The same is true which it comes to our daily life．Even if we run into unexpected difficulties，we should stay optimistic after reaching our goal．Second，when accomplishing a task，we should make the plan．If smokers can't quit smoking once and for all，they can reduce the amount of cigarettes they have per day until this bad habit is dropped complete．In our daily life，we should also arrange our tasks in order to importance-the most urgent first，the less important to follow．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍达到决心要采取的步骤．第一步，对失败要有一个积极的态度；第二步，制定一个计划，即：按照重要性安排任务的顺序．

解答 To achieve determination，we need the followed steps．First，we should adopt a positive attitude towards fail．Although some smokers have tried in vain to give up smoking over a hundred of times，they should continue their attempts and view their previous failure∧part of their success because they have tried after all．The same is true which it comes to our daily life．Even if we run into unexpected difficulties，we should stay optimistic after reaching our goal．Second，when accomplishing a task，we should make the plan．If smokers can't quit smoking once and for all，they can reduce the amount of cigarettes they have per day until this bad habit is dropped complete．In our daily life，we should also arrange our tasks in order to importance-the most urgent first，the less important to follow．
详解：
1．followed改为following 考查现在分词．根据句意：我们需要以下的步骤．用following，意为"以下的"．
2．fail改为failure 考查名词．towards是介词，后接名词作其宾语．
3．去of 考查介词．"一百次"用英语表达是：a hundred temes，不用of．
4．加as 考查固定搭配．view…as意为"把…视作…"，是固定搭配．
5．which改为when 考查连词．when it comes to…意为"当涉及到； 当谈到"，是固定句型．
6．after改为before 考查连词．根据句意：达到目标之前我们应当保持乐观．用连词before．
7．the改为a 考查冠词．根据句意：我们应该制定一个计划．用不定冠词a表示泛指．
8．amount改为number 考查名词．cigarettes是可数名词，应用number，amount用于不可数名词．
9．complete改为completely 考查副词．drop是动词，修饰动词要用副词．
10．to改为of 考查介词．根据句意：我们应当按照重要性安排任务的顺序．用介词of，不是"为了"的意思．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．