题目内容
9.假设你叫李华,你的同班同学小明觉得自己的手机太旧,想买个最新的Iphone5,可是他的父母不同意,为此他很苦恼.请你给他写封信,谈谈你的看法.(注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分.)
分析 这是一篇开放作文,让我们给小明写封信,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.请你给他写封信,谈谈你的看法.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:同班同学小明觉得自己的手机太旧,想买个最新的Iphone5,可是他的父母不同意,为此他很苦恼.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为同学小明想买个最新的Iphone5,父母不同意,作者表示理解.第二部分为买新手机弊大于利.
重点短语与句型:
replace…with 用…替代…
point out 指出
gain more knowleage 获得更多的知识
distract…from 使分心
高分句型一:But as your classmate and good friend,I want to point out that what your parents did is for your own good.此句that引导的宾语从句中用了what your parents did 主语从句
高分句型二:Using newest Iphone is really cool and eyes-catching.此句动名词Using作主语.
解答 Dear Ming,
I recently heard that you want to replace your old cell phone with the newest Iphone5,but your parents didn't agree to buy it for you.
You must be distressed by your parents'decision at this time.But as your classmate and good friend,I want to point out that what your parents did is for your own good(高分句型一).Because at current stage of life,our most important task is studying and gaining more knowleage to become useful people for the society.(同学小明想买个最新的Iphone5,父母不同意,作者表示理解)
Using newest Iphone is really cool and eyes-catching(高分句型二 ).But that digital gadget will distract you from focusing on your study.Neither your parents nor I want to see that happen.According to what I said before,I hope you pay more attention to your homework instead of cellphones.That's what we should do right now.(买新手机弊大于利)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A.Lend a hand. B.Keep your eyes open. C.Be seen,but not be heard. D.Make friends with your neighbors. E.Volunteer in your community. F.Keep your home safe and attractive. |
(71)C
No one likes a noisy neighbor.Do you hold parties that last all night?Do you leave your dog outside to bark all day?Remember that not everyone has the same schedule as you do,so use some common sense.Keep noise to the lowest level.If you're holding a party that's likely to be loud,invite everyone within earshot.
(72)D
It's much easier to solve any problem with neighbors if you have a friendly relationship with those around you.Furthermore,you may realize that you have things in common and make a lifelong friend.
(73)B
Once you know your neighbors,then you'll also know if something seems out of place in the neighborhood.Are strange people carrying expensive things out of one neighbor's house?Have several days passed since your elderly neighbor last collected his newspaper?The benefit of keeping an eye out for unusual behavior in the neighborhood is that others will do the same for you.
(74)A
It never hurts to follow the Golden Rule:Do to others what you would like them to do to you.Treat your neighbors with respect.Offer to drive an elderly neighbor to the grocery store.Volunteer to collect mail while a neighbor is on vacation.The more often you lend a helping hand,the more likely that your neighbors will do the same for you when you need a little help.
(75)E
Don't just limit your neighborly actions to your block or street.Remember that everyone who lives in a community has the ability to help make it a better place.Think about your passion and find a way to do it on a volunteer basis in your town.Volunteer at the local library.Enjoy working with kids.Consider becoming a scout leader.Whatever your passion is,there's sure to be a thing suitable for you to help in the local community.