Question

假如你是申宁，根据下面的提示，给你的朋友王东发一电子邮件。

1.上个礼拜，我去公园玩，进大门后碰巧遇上几位从美国来遂宁旅游的大学生。

2.你向他们打招呼并交谈，然后带着他们游览公园。大家玩的很开心。出来的时候，在大门外你又帮他们买了些东西。

3.美国朋友向你表示了感谢，之后你们便分手了。

4.谈谈自己的感受。

注意：

1.写作应包括以上文字涉及的各项内容。

2.为使写作流畅，在不影响主题表达完整准确的前提下，允许必要的增减与发挥。

3.词数80—100，开头已给出

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, Wang Dong,

I went to the park last week. After entering the main gate, I came across some foreign visitors. I greeted them and we began talking in English .I got to know that they were college students from USA traveling in Suining.

I showed them around the park. We all had a wonderful time. When we came out of the gate, I helped them do some shopping. Then they thanked me and left. I felt very happy and proud that I could be of some help to others and talk with foreigners. And I also made some American friends.

Bye for now

Shen Ning

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文的写作。要求根据提示，写一篇电子邮件，介绍自己在星期天，帮助几个美国的大学生的事情，考点只需要翻译即可，在谈谈自己的感受的时候，要用自己的语言表述自己的观点，稍有难度，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型如I got to know that they were college students from USA traveling in Suining.这句话用了现在分词做定语，还有这句话I felt very happy and proud that I could be of some help to others and talk with foreigners.be of some help运用的很恰当。这些都是作文的亮点。

考点：考查提纲类作文的写作

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，此类作文虽然好写，但是要写出特色是很不容易的。关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化。