Question

请根据以下提示，结合你在生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

In your school life , maybe there’s a certain teacher who you will never forget .Tell us the reasons why he or she makes you unforgettable .

注意：1.无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

3.词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

In my school life , I have met many people who are really worth my recalling . But perhaps the most unforgettable person is my math teacher .

She was really open-minded and funny . Not only did she help us in class but also after class . I still remember one time I got a “B” in the final exam . I liked math best and the teacher took pride in me all the time , however , I failed . I felt so frustrated that I lost my energy and confidence . Then one day , I happened to meet her in the street , and my face turned red right away . To my surprise , she patted me on the shoulder with a smile , asked me not to give up and even encouraged me to worked harder . Later , she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math .In addition , she gave me every chance to show my thought about all kinds of problems , with whose help , I made great progress .

I will never forget the love and care she showed to me .

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。需要写的话题已经给出，要求内容必须结合生活中的一个事例写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】I have met many people who are really worth my recalling这里含有一个定语从句；Not only did she help us in class but also after class .这里倒装句；I felt so frustrated that I lost my energy and confidence.这里含有一个宾语从句。

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