题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意,请根据要点(箭头所指内容)写一封申请信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯;
3. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children’s winter camp.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children’s winter camp. I’m quite interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.
I’m outgoing, energetic, well-organized and responsible. And most importantly, I love working with children! In the past two years, as the monitor in my class, I have proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers. I speak fluent English, which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English-only environment.
I will soon have a three-week winter vacation, so I have no problem working on evenings and weekends. I can start working from the end of this month. I would appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
亮点说明:本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。并列句的使用:I’m quite interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.非限制性定语从句的使用:I speak fluent English, which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English-only environment.固定句型的使用:I would appreciate it if...