Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

进入高中生活以来已经有两个月的时间了，在这一段时间里，一定有令你难忘的回忆，请描述令你印象深刻的一件事，并谈谈你的体会。

注意：请勿出现真实的班级和姓名。

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Answer 1

【答案】Generally speaking, high school life is busy and fulfilling. In my opinion, my high school life is challengeable and warm.

　　I used to be very shy and had some difficulty making new friends. However, my first task in high school was to introduce myself in front of all my classmates. I got fully prepared and tried to remember every word by heart. Unfortunately, when it was my turn to make the speech, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Seeing that, my teacher said gently to me, ”Take it easy. Be confident and you can make it.” To encourage me, my classmates applauded me. Suddenly I was not nervous any more, and I finished my speech fluently and perfectly. Again, the classroom broke into thunderous applause.

　　It was my teacher and classmates that made me more confident. It was the most unforgettable thing in my life.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一件高中生活中难忘的事。

第一步：审题

体裁：记叙文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。

结构：三段式

　　　首段：简要描述高中生活的特点，引起下文

　　　中间段：具体描述一件难忘的事。

尾段：总结全文，点题。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

busy and fulfilling，challengeable and warm，have some difficulty making new friends，

by heart，so … that…，take it easy，broke into thunderous applause

第三步：连词成句

In my opinion, my high school life is challengeable and warm.

I used to be very shy and had some difficulty making new friends.

When it was my turn to make the speech, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word.

My teacher said gently to me, ”Take it easy. Be confident and you can make it.”

Suddenly I was not nervous any more, and I finished my speech fluently and perfectly.

The classroom broke into thunderous applause.

It was my teacher and classmates that made me more confident.

It was the most unforgettable thing in my life.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

Generally speaking, in my opinion, However, Unfortunately, Seeing that, Again,

第五步：润色修改