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假如你叫李华,今年进入高三,学习,压力很大,想和父母说说心里话,请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下:

知心话

感恩

感谢父母的关心、鼓励

对父母的期望

1. 多加交流

2. 适时提供帮助

学习打算

考生自拟(至少写两点)

注意: 1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥。

2. 词数:120左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数)。

Dear Mom and Dad,

Entering Senior Three, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

 

Dear Mom and Dad,

Entering Senior Three, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant

encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my study.

Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contributes to my staying in a good state.

I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, "no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy load of studies.

Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文的属于提纲类写作,要求对父母说说心里话,话题切合考生实际,与考生的生活非常贴近,考生有话可说,有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的,要求考生有较强的整合能力,在写作时充分利用连接词,高级句型和词汇,如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语,以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词,可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。

【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组:Thanks to 多亏,making remarkable progress 取得很大的进步,made up my mind to 决定,make every effort to study努力学习, the key to…的关键。 还使用了不少精典句式,如: Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. 这句话使用了固定句型,I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句,I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.这句话使用了定语从句, Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。文章还恰当地使用了俗语:Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains."。

考点: 提纲类作文

 

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Ancient Greece and Rome

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2:15

Ancient Mexico and Peru

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2:30

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Highlights of the Museum 20th Century Paintings

1.Walking tours of the Museum’s collections are offered on __________.

A. November 29. B. December 20

C. December 31 D. December 10

2.What time is the latest Chinese Art Class?

A. 1:45 B. 2:45

C. 10:30 D. 10:45

3. When is the last Old Master Paintings?

A. Friday 7:00 B. Tuesday 9:00

C. Friday 1:00 D. Thursday 1:00

4.Which one starts the earliest?

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B. Egyptian Galleries

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Recently I spoke to some of my students about what they wanted to do after they graduated, and what kind of job prospects they thought they had.

Given that I teach students who are training to be doctors, I was surprised to find that most thought that they would not be able to get the jobs they wanted without “outside help”. “What kind of help is that?” I asked, expecting them to tell me that they would need a relative or family friend to help them out.

“Surgery(外科手术)”, one replied. I was pretty alarmed by that response. It seems that the graduates of today are increasingly willing to go under the knife to get ahead of others when it comes to getting a job. One girl told me that she was considering surgery to increase her height.“They break your legs, put in special extending screws, and slowly expand the gap between the two ends of the bone as it regrows, you can get at least 5cm taller!”

At that point, I was shocked. I am short, I can’t deny that, but I don’t think I would put myself through months of agony(痛苦) just to be a few centimeters taller. I don’t even bother to wear shoes with thick soles, as I’m not trying to hide the fact that I am just not tall! It seems to me that there is a trend toward wanting “perfection”, and that is an ideal that just does not exist in reality.

No one is born perfect, yet magazines, TV shows and movies present images of thin, tall, beautiful people as being the norm. Advertisements for slimming aids, beauty treatments and cosmetic surgery clinics fill the pages of newspapers, further creating an idea that “perfection” is a requirement, and that it must be purchased, no matter what the cost. In my opinion, skills, rather than appearance, should determine how successful a person is in his chosen career.

1.We can know from the passage that the author works as ______.

A. a doctor B. a model C. a teacher D. a reporter

2..Many graduates today turn to cosmetic(美容) surgery to______.

A. marry a better man\woman

B. become a model

C. get an advantage over others in job-hunt

D. attract more admirers

3.According to the passage, the author believes that ______.

A. everyone should purchase perfection, whatever the cost

B. it’s right for graduates to ask for others to help them out in hunting for jobs

C. media are to blame for misleading young people in their seeking for surgery

D. it is one’s appearance instead of skills that really matters in one’s career

4.What does the author think of his height?

A. He hates to be called a short man.

B. He tries to increase his height through surgery.

C. He always wears shoes with thick soles to hide the fact.

D. He just accepts it as it is

 

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